refactor: (I tried to zalgo this and it broke)
a dorito with a goatee ([personal profile] refactor) wrote 2016-08-10 01:39 pm (UTC)

[ Jack may have been deadass asleep, but he is also a very light sleeper. As soon as Liz starts to stir and struggle, Jack is quickly awake, even though the quickness of how he jerks awake is probably comical. It's about a half-step from falling out of his chair, but not quite. Good job, asshole. Though truly hilariously, Jack's concern ends up being much gentler. He doesn't quite kick Jason out of the way when he approaches Elizabeth, but there's a sense that he's probably close to doing just that... ]

Woah, Liz, take it easy— You okay?

[ Jason is already helping her up, so he won't try and steal that away, but his concern is definitely more open. Also he doesn't seem to care as much about the results here, since he doesn't respond to that, but it's more like he can get to that in a second. Again, good job, asshole. ]

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